After She Has Gone

06/08/11

Walking out into the woods there was no moon overhead to guide him. Bumping into the trees, he wound his way deep into the forest, tripping over roots that herniated through the dirt. The darkness wrapped around him and he went on walking, the gun dangling from the end of his right hand, and his legs kept moving. He thought it would be easy to give up now that everything is gone—the money spent, his job an echo, her essence reduced to a figment. It should be easy to just roll over and die. He found that at the center of this forest, the depths of his own morass of fear and remorse, that maybe he didn’t want to do that. There was a rustling in the bushes, a flutter of wings, and something expansive spread out against the dark sky, black on black, no discernible shape, only the feeling of movement and a sense of great speed, a brush of wind on his face, and he tried to breathe again.

~ fin ~

Richard Thomas is the author of three books—TransubstantiateHerniated Roots and Staring Into the Abyss. His over 75 publications include Cemetery DancePANK, Gargoyle, Weird Fiction Review, Midwestern Gothic, Arcadia, Pear Noir and Shivers VI (with Stephen King and Peter Straub). He is also the editor of three anthologies out in 2014: The Lineup (Black Lawrence Press), Burnt Tongues (Medallion Press) with Chuck Palahniuk and The New Black (Dark House Press). In his spare time he writes for The Nervous Breakdown, LitReactor, and is Editor-in-Chief at Dark House Press. For more information visit www.whatdoesnotkillme.com.

This was amazing. So much tension and emotion in so few words. The despair of one who has nothing left to lose. Superb.
Joyce Juzwik
June 10, 2011
Excellent work as always, Richard. Love the quiet tension of it.
Nik Korpon
June 08, 2011
Very finely tuned and detailed writing. Fantastic work.
Chris Rhatigan
June 08, 2011
The excellent fiction here lately keeps reminding me of great songs
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June 08, 2011
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June 08, 2011
I like the feel of this. The expectancy. Like the universe has paused for this guy, this moment, waiting for the ball to drop with a click or a gunshot into its slot. Whole lotta story inherent in just a few words. Cool stuff, man.
AJ Hayes
June 08, 2011
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June 08, 2011
Thanks Sabrina and Paul, I appreciate the kind words.
Richard Thomas
June 08, 2011
Nicely done!
Sabrina Ogden
June 08, 2011
Wonderful, dark, writing.
Paul D Brazill
June 08, 2011

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