Elbow Deep

11/23/12

There are only three things you should ever go into debt for:

Your house, because let’s face it, who the hell has 200 grand just sitting around?

A new car, I never borrowed money on one of those until I got sick of driving around in ten year old beaters with no air conditioning or CD player or nothing. You get to certain age where you want comfort, you want reliability. So, yeah, take five years to pay off a car loan. And cars have gotten to be just like houses, who the fuck has 30 grand sitting around to blow on a car?

Education, fuck that noise, it’s not like that shit’s going to get you anywhere. But let the kids figure that out when after they graduate and find out all their bullshit degree gets them is a job bussing tables at a Denny’s and hoping one of the waiters quits so they can move up into their position. But still, I guess it’s kinda important.

Everything else, use cash.

Don’t go into debt for jewelry for your wife, because chances are she’ll leave you when she finds out you’ve been buying the blonde, eastern European piece of ass you’ve had on the side for ten years better, more expensive jewelry.

Don’t go into debt buying jewelry for the blonde, eastern European piece of ass you’ve had on the side for the past ten years, because blonde eastern European pieces of ass are nothing but whores who have dozens of guys just like you buying her equally expensive pieces of jewelry.

Don’t go into debt buying a drum kit for your awkward, hyperactive 16-year-old son, because all that little shit is going to do is try and beat the shit out of you when he finds out that you’ve been cheating on his mother for ten years.

Don’t go into debt buying drinks for your work buddies, because all those fuckers are going to do is drink their drinks, never pick up a round, and try to throw you under the bus to save their own careers when internal affairs catches them shaking down a crack dealer for a couple of thousand bucks and a couple of grams of uncut powder.

Don’t go into debt to crack dealers, because they’ll have you bringing the hammer down on their competitors once a week and raiding evidence lockers so much that the pricks from internal affairs will start taking an even harder look at you.

Don’t go into debt bribing internal affairs, because those fuckers keep coming back wanting more and more until they’re taking a clear 40% and hinting around for an even bigger chunk.

But most important of all, don’t go into debt for the Bears vs. the Packers; the Angels vs. the Yankees; the Lakers vs. the Suns—Hell, make that any team out of Arizona, they’re nothing but a losing proposition, because if you do find yourself neck deep from the losing ways of your favorite teams and their inability to cover the spread, you may find yourself in the handicap bathroom stall of terminal 4 at Sky Harbor airport elbow deep in some Mexican national because your bookie swears the kid is hauling fifty grand worth of precious stones up in his colon, and that’ll just about cover your debt.

Avoid all those things and you’re sure to live a successful, fulfilling life.

~ fin ~

Keith Rawson lives in Southern Arizona with his wife and daughters. He’s a regular columnist for LitReactor.com and Gamut Magazine. You can see hundreds of nude photographs of him at his website: lifeinmetropolis.com

Nice way to build to the punchline. Lessons to live by. I'll take them to heart.
R.J. Spears
November 26, 2012
This was so well laid out. Great voice and use of detail.
Patti Abbott
November 26, 2012
Very good advice.
PaulDBrazill
November 24, 2012
That's all I'm trying to accomplish, sir.
Keith Rawson
November 23, 2012
Parables and lessons to prevent doom. Awesome. I liked the narrative technique you used! Good work Keith.
Isaac Kirkman
November 23, 2012
hah! Highly original structure, yet that signature Rawson hopelessness. Well played, sir. Well played.
Benoît Lelièvre
November 23, 2012
Great structure, pacing, and use of POV.
Jeffery Hess
November 23, 2012
I don't get it. Just kidding. This was great. I loved how each paragraph got a little worse until, when the whole picture came into focus, this narrator was in a sh*theap up to his scalp. Great one.
Ryan Sayles
November 23, 2012
Just wonderful from start to finish. Love the structure.
Erik Arneson
November 23, 2012
All up in there, Mr. Rawson. Well done
Paul von Stoetzel
November 23, 2012
Words to live by. Completely original, utterly enjoyable. Masterfully done.
Mike Miner
November 23, 2012
I feel a lot better about my mortgage, car, and education loans. Good life lessons.
Bruce Harris
November 23, 2012
NOT being elbow deep in Mexican National is definitely a good thing. So clever, this is like a story told backwards, sideways and upsidedown.
michaelmonson
November 23, 2012
And exorcising those confining demons of genre.
Tom Pitts
November 23, 2012
Good one, Keith. Some sound advice.
Chris Rhatigan
November 23, 2012
Nice ... Always pushing the creative envelope.
Tom Pitts
November 23, 2012

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