Return of the Tingler

12/21/12

As the bright spring afternoon melted into evening, Dr Shearing’s office grew darker. As did Lee Madison’s thoughts.

‘13 Ghosts?’ said Dr Shearing. He pulled sharply at his shirt cuffs. ‘I can’t say that I’m familiar with that particular film, or Mr William Castle’s oeuvre as a director, to be honest.’

Lee Madison cringed as Shearing spoke. The psychiatrist whistled when he pronounced the letter‘s’ and the sound almost perforated Lee’s ear drums.

‘Oh it was massively popular at the time. There was even a remake a while back,’ said Lee. ‘All flash-trash and CGI, though.’

The egg stain on Dr Shearing’s paisley tie had distracted Lee so much he’d had to turn away to look at the silent television in the corner of the room. Images of corn fields rolled across the screen.

‘But The Tingler was his most famous film,’ continued Lee. ‘He set up a gadget in the cinema seats that gave people little electric shocks when The Tingler appeared on the screen.’ He turned to Shearing and grinned, beamed.

‘A monster that lives on fear, you say? Quite clever actually,’ said Dr Shearing, who was sweating even more than usual. ‘A slightly Freudian shadow cast, eh?’

He took his ballpoint pen and scribbled on a yellow post-it-note that he then stuck inside his worn brown briefcase. He clicked the briefcase closed and looked at Lee.

‘So, you said you were about seven when your own particular ‘Tingler.’ appeared?

Lee nodded to himself. Glanced at Shearing.

‘I think so. We were on a school day out . I was running down the side of a cliff with a group of other kids when I started to panic. Imagined myself crashing down to the ground below. My head smashed to pieces. And then the panic took control of me. So, I decided to see what would happen if I just let myself fall.’

‘And?’

 

‘Everything went black and red. I came to near a swimming pool and a teacher was shouting at me while she bathed my face in chlorine stinking water. I was off school for weeks. Never really got into the habit of going to school after that, to be honest.’

‘And The Tingle returned when?’

‘Off and on. When I saw the school bus turn the corner, for example. I just wanted to throw myself under it. Or if I saw a sharp knife, I felt the urge to run it across my tongue.’

Shearing repressed a grimace.

‘And when did this stop?’

‘Well, it didn’t. It got worse when I was a teenager. The Tingler was like a cowl wrapping itself around my head. Smothering my brain. My thoughts.’

‘And nothing could stop it? Ease it?’

‘Sex took the edge off for a while. But that didn’t last long.’

‘So, that is when you started drinking?’

‘Yes, the booze helped. And then the drugs.

‘But…’

‘Their affects wore off pretty quickly. And then, one night, just after Christmas, I was walking down a path, late at night. It was freezing. I saw an old man shuffling in front of me. Almost slipping over on the ice. In a flash, I realised that I could just kill him. And it wouldn’t matter. No one would know. I could get away with it without a problem. The Tingler almost strangled me.’

‘And.’

‘And so I picked up a brick , ran up to him and smashed his head to pieces like a soft boiled egg.’

Shearing gulped. His mouth arid.

‘And what happened to The Tingler after that,’ said Shearing, looking uncomfortable.

‘It was gone for aquite long time after that. But, it was always lurking somewhere in the back of my mind. Of course, it crept further forward. Until eventually it was at the front of my brain.’

‘And now?’

‘A singular truth, Doctor. There truly are no consequences.’

Lee swept up a pencil and stabbed it into Dr Shearing’s eye. Again and again. Pushing it up toward his brain.

And The Tingler slipped away from his body like a shadow during night time. Only waiting for the break of dawn.

~ fin ~

Paul D. Brazill is the author of Gumshoe, Guns Of Brixton and Roman Dalton - Werewolf PI. He was born in England and lives in Poland. He is an International Thriller Writers Inc member whose writing has been translated into Italian, Polish and Slovene. He has had writing published in various magazines and anthologies, including The Mammoth Books of Best British Crime 8,10 and 11, alongside the likes of Ian Rankin, Neil Gaiman and Lee Child. He has edited a few anthologies, including the best-selling True Brit Grit – with Luca Veste.

Ha! I loved it. Maybe that's what was missing from my therapy sessions.
Dana Kabel
December 26, 2012
Beautiful, Paul. So good I could actually feel the tingle.
Dyer Wilk
December 23, 2012
Thanks everyone. Glad it tingled!
Paul D. Brazill
December 23, 2012
Chilling. Nice slow build.
R.J. Spears
December 23, 2012
This was impressive. I liked the "13 Ghosts" reference.
Zach Wilhide
December 22, 2012
as usual, great stuff from Mr. Brazill
Bill Baber
December 22, 2012
Top Notch, PDB!
agriffy
December 22, 2012
That story scared me.
michaelmonson
December 22, 2012
Great stuff Paul!
Chris Leek
December 22, 2012
Yikes! Creepy and terrifying.
Erik Arneson
December 21, 2012
Very cool story. Well done.
Edward Vaughn
December 21, 2012
Creepy and good. I'm in the mood for a Vincent Price movie.
Bruce Harris
December 21, 2012
Nasty! Great yarn, PB!
Andrez Bergen
December 21, 2012
Nothing like a good shot of pointy graphite to the eyeball to clear things up nicely. Beats the hell out of a pen. Those inkstains are bloody hard to get out. Cool.
bhayes2
December 21, 2012
Cheers all. This is a 90% true life/autobiographical piece. Glad it tickled.
Paul D. Brazill
December 21, 2012
Lovely eyeball action - brilliant Paul!
Ruth Jacobs
December 21, 2012
As chilling as the season, a great little stocking stuffer for the holidays. Nice one, Paul.
Mike Miner
December 21, 2012
Nasty is right. Well done Paul!
Chris Irvin
December 21, 2012
Patti said it: Eeek, and well done.
Albert Tucher
December 21, 2012
As do i Patti ...
Paul D. Brazill
December 21, 2012
Nasty, but beautifully done
Martin Stanley
December 21, 2012
Eek. And I have a personal memory that ties in with this. Eek again.
Patti Nase Abbott
December 21, 2012
Loved the opening and the closure lines, ties it all together effortlessly. Another good one Paul!
Isaac Kirkman
December 21, 2012
That's the stuff!
Kate Laity
December 21, 2012

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