The Bag in the Corner

05/23/16

This guy looks soft, Harley thought. A trucker from the city who don’t know his way around the back-road truck stops. Easy pickin’s.

Harley had watched the guy reading a paperback while eating his dinner at the truck stop café. Harley had seen him arrive, driving a reefer, a big refrigerated truck. Harley didn’t know what cargo the mark was carrying, but that didn’t really matter. To Harley and his buddy Chuck, the hunt was the main thing. Seeing a man cower in fear was a bigger thrill than taking whatever loot they might carry away. Sometimes it gave Harley more than a rush, it gave him a boner. But he never told Chuck that. Didn’t want Chuck to think he was queer.

The mark had been friendly when Harley and Chuck approached him in the almost-deserted parking lot behind the truck stop. When he saw the guns, though, the friendliness turned to fear.
He started stuttering and stammering. “Hey, what do you guys want?”

Chuck answered, “We want you to shut the fuck up and open the back of your rig.”

The mark started to protest but did as Chuck told him, opening the truck’s back door, letting loose a blast of cold air into the hot summer night. “Listen, guys, I’ll do whatever you want, just please let me go. I got a wife and a kid and I—”

“Didn’t he tell you to shut the fuck up?” Harley smashed the butt of his pistol on the man’s forehead. When he saw he was bleeding the mark started to panic but was too afraid to speak.

This is awesome, thought Harley. Total fear. Totally at our mercy.

Harley noticed a lot of the boxes in the reefer were marked STEAKS, which was great – he’d be hungry after they finished this job. Then he noticed a huge insulated bag in the back corner of the cargo area. Looked big enough to hold a whole side of beef. “What’s in the bag?” Harley asked.

“Th–that’s for my family,” the guy stammered, his eyes wide with fear. “Please, take anything you want, but please leave that for my family.”

“We’ll decide what to take, not you,” said Chuck. “What’s in it?”

“Just some stuff for my family. Please!” said the mark, trembling all over. He looked like he was about to cry. The man’s fear was like a drug to Harley, who was starting to get hard.

“If you’re not gonna answer the question, then shut up,” said Harley, feeling more powerful than ever. “We’ll see for ourselves.” The mark looked like he was about to keep talking so
Harley bashed him in the head again, this time with his fist.

The man fell into the corner of the truck and whimpered as he cowered in the shadows.

Chuck and Harley knelt by the bag. “I bet it’s a side of beef,” said Harley, excited.

“Help me figure out how to open this,” Chuck said. They rolled the bag over—it was heavy—and found a zipper.

When the zipper was open, it took them both a couple of seconds to fully realize what they were seeing. It was a face. A man’s face, with frost in his beard, his eyes open wide. This wasn’t a side of beef, it was a man’s corpse. A frozen corpse.

“Holy shit,” said Chuck. Suddenly a crowbar connected with the back of Chuck’s head and he crumpled, unconscious, on top of the bag and the frozen body.

Harley stood up quick. “What the–” He turned around and faced the mark, who was no longer cowering in fear but was standing a foot from Harley, a blood-stained crowbar in his hand.

Now Harley was the one stammering. “Who–who is that?” he asked, cocking his head toward the bag.

Harley could see the rage in the man’s eyes as he answered, “That’s the last motherfucker who tried to rob me.” Harley saw the crowbar coming at him but there was no time to react before it struck the side of his face and he too crumpled onto the body bag.

~ fin ~

Darrell Z. Grizzle is a former parole officer who now works as a counselor in private practice. He lives with two cats in a house-in-the-woods in Marietta, Georgia. His horror and crime fiction has been published in Shotgun Honey, Near to the Knuckle, Story & Grit, Eldritch Tales, Mad Scientist Journal, and Daily Science Fiction. His home on the web is www.ShadowHaunted.com.

That is a cool ending.
Chamblee54
June 03, 2016
Awesome! Perfectly awesome.
Jessica Nettles
May 28, 2016
Short and sweet. Enjoyed it!
Bruce Harris
May 23, 2016
Bravo! Nicely done!
M.C. Neuda
May 23, 2016
Thanks!
Darrell Grizzle
May 23, 2016
A great debut!
Bill Baber
May 23, 2016

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