The Treacherous Road – Part 2

04/15/11
Note: For those who may have missed it The Treacherous Road – Part One

Carl shifted the black Dodge Challenger into third, grinding the pedal hard into the floor. She shook uncontrollably over the Nevada desert terrain. He felt her chassis tearing up good underneath. But he wasn’t slowing down. Not until that bitch was cold. If Joey pissed him off anymore he’d bury him too. He’d make up some story and tell Johnny how he just got in the way. “There you are, you…”

Joey already had Samantha in his arms. Carl shifted again and reached over for his .45 on the seat. Joey saw an opening. All Carl saw was a huge rock flying towards the windshield and he turned the wheel hard.

The car swerved, kicking up a cloud of debris, and the gun went off. Bullets turned the roof into Swiss cheese. He attempted one more round but the car hit a large boulder, slamming his hand against the window frame in the process. A tire burst. The gun flew. So did the car.

The Challenger took off like a rocket and came down hard, rolling in the process.

“Stay here Sam.” The barely dressed Vegas dancer didn’t say a word. She didn’t even move.

Joey picked up the gun, like he was King Arthur, out of the dirt. He checked the clip. More than enough.

The Dodge sat upside down. One of the tires still spun. It was totaled. The windows were spider-webbed and blown out. Carl didn’t wear his belt. Thought only pussies wore them. A mangled clump twenty feet away crawled to Hell on a trail of its own blood. Joey would help get him there a little faster.

Joey stood over him and clicked back the hammer. “Carl. Turn over, man. I ain’t shooting you in the back.”
It took him a good long minute, through some heavy pain, but he finally rolled.

“Look at… arugh… that. The pussy finally grows a pair.”

“Those gonna be your last words then?” Joey stepped in closer. “She didn’t have it. Do you hear me, you sack of shit? She didn’t even KNOW about it. Did YOU know that?”

“Who the hell cares…. hurrrgh… I didn’t ask.” Dark blood dripped from the corner of his mouth. “He just said take care of her. And if it meant… if I got a piece of that ass before I did it…well hurrah for me. That’s what….”

Samantha snapped her head toward the loud bang.

Carl’s death was easier than he deserved. Joey should have let him bleed out. It would have looked like an accident at first. But he was sending a message. The buzzards would have their way with Carl soon enough.

“Come on. Get up. We’re getting out of here,” Joey said. Samantha looked up, her face blank, still shaking from nerves.

“Look, Sam, we’ve got to get out of here,” Joey said. “Johnny is probably expecting Carl to report in when it’s done and we’re far past how long it’d take to… we gotta get movin’ baby.”

They walked in silence for hours in the scorching desert sun.

“Where are we going Joey? What’s the plan?” Samantha asked.

“Plan?” Joey turned toward her and laughed. “I’m making this up as I go along. Last night Johnny told me to pick you up and ask you a few questions. Now we’re here. Apparently something else was… is… I don’t know… going on and what I’ve been told was far different from what Carl knew.”

He stopped himself and walked off a few feet away from Samantha, taking it all in. “Look. I’m sorry Sam. I had nothing to do with you… this…. The world’s much better off without that asshole. But you… you’re just a dancer that Johnny forced into doing something he shouldn’t of.”

Joey turned around, “All you did was pick up a goddamn bag. Something got fucked up along the way and now he’s pinning it on you. It’s definitely on me now, too. God knows what he said. Maybe he planned it that way. Maybe it’s the coke whore…”

“I ain’t no whore and the coke was just that one…”

“I’m not saying you are… let’s just keep walking.”

“Any bullets left?”

“Yeah. Just one.”

~ fin ~

ASchiavino

From the halls of Marvel Comics as an x-mutant editorial intern, to the heights of the Flatiron designing book covers, and straight on through as newspaper art director, Anthony Schiavino has seen action and then some.

Anthony is currently working on his first novel, Shotglass Memories. He also co-publishes the pulp line of books, Episodes from the Zero Hour!

His greatest achievement, however, is and will always be his daughter.

Thanks AJ! Might be a bit rocky along the way but we'll see what happens.
sgtzero
April 19, 2011
Nicely planted hook. In for the ride, man.
ajhayes2
April 19, 2011
Dave, Don, Elizabeth, and Angie...thanks so much for the comments. Apparently there will be a part three and it may debut here even.

Angie...it's all about servicing the characters and the story. Truth be told this is the first time I'm really using this kind of language in a story. Again it has to service and not be for the sake of. I feel the same way about the violence. Nothing makes me happier when somebody reads it and likes it but isn't into the subject matter. I've had that with most of the people who have read my comic. I don't want to preach to the choir.

Thanks again for the comments everyone. They are appreciated.
--Anthony
sgtzero
April 18, 2011
Me too, waiting for the next part. I hate violence but your story is compelling. Great read!
Angie
April 17, 2011
Well done. And I know how *I* want part three to turn out, so now you have to write it so I can see if I'm even close. :-)
Elizabeth
April 16, 2011
I'm feelin' it. But Joey's fucked.
Don Lafferty
April 16, 2011
Niiiice. (even if it is a part 2 :-))
Dave White
April 16, 2011
Thanks for all the kind words everyone. So it seems between the comments here, Twitter, and on Facebook...everyone wants part 3. I'm glad you all enjoyed it. There's some stiff competition, in a good way, here and I'm very humbled you like it.

And on that note I'm going to go have a glass of whiskey. --Anthony
sgtzero
April 15, 2011
Good cliff-hanger!
Nancy
April 15, 2011
Totally cool! I'm anxious to read the next part... there is more, right? Right? Nice job, Anthony!
Sabrina E. Ogden
April 15, 2011
Really excellent! What a cliffhanger - can't wait for Part 3! There WILL be a Part 3, right?!
Lelina
April 15, 2011
Thanks for the save, Mr. Barber!
Shotgun Honey
April 15, 2011
Nice follow-up, Anthony. Look forward to the next installment.

(Should "petal" be "pedal" in the first line?)
David Barber
April 15, 2011
Cracking sequel. Part three is in the wings?
Paul D. Brazill
April 15, 2011
OK..so when do I get to read part 3?? What a tease! Where are they headed? So many questions......

Well done!
McDroll
April 15, 2011

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