White Ink

06/24/11

‘Words are our tools, Craig. Even our weapons, sometimes’ said Katy sipping her long glass of gin and leaning back against the switched-off cigarette machine.

‘They have no meaning within themselves but we give them meaning depending on our own experiences and prejudices. For example, if I describe a man as single it’s one thing –maybe he’s a bit of jack the lad, a lady-killer, like you…’

Craig smirked, his chubby lips looking even more rubbery.

‘But if I say that someone’s a bachelor then what do you think of?

Craig peeled the label from his bottle of Efes.

‘A bachelor gay? Lives with his mother? Kiddy fiddler, maybe?’ he said.

‘Aha. And what do you think of when you hear the word spinster?’

‘Oh, frigid, I suppose. Lesbian. A bit desperate. Gagging for it!’ He laughed and snorted beer through his nose.

‘You see, that’s why I don’t tell people that I’m a librarian. Because of the connotations.’

‘Yeah? I see what you mean,’ said Craig, who very clearly didn’t have a clue what Katy was talking about.

And she was loving it. Loving watching him squirm as he tried to concentrate on what she was saying and tear his gaze away from her cleavage. Especially when she accidently-on-purpose dropped the ice cube between her breasts.

‘But you don’t look anything like my idea of a librarian,’ he said. He almost licked his lips off  his face.

‘Well there you are. It’s a matter of perspective. For example two people could describe the same person in a different way, depending on their political bent. One man will say that someone’s a freedom fighter and another will call him a terrorist.’

‘One man’s fish is another one’s poisson?’ said Craig, crunching a mint between his shiny, white, teeth.

‘Exactly. One man could say, for example, that you’re well-built and others would say you’re fat.’ She winked.

Craig flushed and Katy patted his wrist.

‘But I don’t need to explain that to you, do I?’ She beamed at him. ‘You’re a successful estate agent. You put a spin on words all the time, eh? Make gold from lead. Turn shit to shinola?’

Craig laughed, seeing this as way out of the conversation and an inroad into talking about himself.

‘Well, the place I saw last week could only be described in one way- a goldmine! Bought it for a song, too. The daft old bird didn’t have a clue what she was signing over.’

‘You’re, wicked,’ said Katy, with a wink. She looked at her watch. ‘I’d better be going.’

‘Your chariot awaits!’ said Craig, holding his briefcase in front of his hard-on as he stood.

***

The night was inky black as Craig parked the car outside his Chelsea flat, eager to get Katy through the oak door.

‘And then there’s my hobby. It’s such a cliché for a librarian, such a stereotype,’ said Katy.

 

‘What’s that, then?’ Craig unfastened his seat belt and twisted round toward her.

‘Knitting!’ she said ‘Imagine! A librarian who likes knitting? Just think of those connotations. That’s why we have to be careful what we put in these online dating profiles, eh? Why I had to say I was a lawyer.’ She put her black handbag onto her knee and pulled out a ball of  wool, knitting needles skewering through it.

Craig grinned and leaned toward Katy.

‘Well, I prefer what I see in the flesh.’

Katy smiled as she took a black object from her bag and slammed it between Craig’s legs. It buzzed and he screamed.

The scream melded with the whine of the Taser as it started to charge up again. He sobbed as the sound grew louder and Katy jammed it up against the side of his neck..

‘And , of course, one man’s serial killer is another woman’s vigilante, eh?’ she said, slamming a  knitting needle into Craig’s ear.

 

 

~ fin ~

Paul D Brazill pic

Paul D. Brazill is the author of Gumshoe, Guns Of Brixton and Roman Dalton – Werewolf PI. He was born in England and lives in Poland. He is an International Thriller Writers Inc member whose writing has been translated into Italian, Polish and Slovene. He has had writing published in various magazines and anthologies, including The Mammoth Books of Best British Crime 8,10 and 11, alongside the likes of Ian Rankin, Neil Gaiman and Lee Child. He has edited a few anthologies, including the best-selling True Brit Grit – with Luca Veste.

Missed this first go round. Brilliant!
Glenn Gray
August 11, 2011
Nicely done!
Naomi Johnson
July 21, 2011
Words are weapons, indeed. Fine twist at the end.
June 29, 2011
Paul -- loved it -- glad I made it back here
Chad Rohrbacher
June 28, 2011
Brutal, I love it!
Ben
June 27, 2011
I think the knitting needle is a perfect weapon. I'd say Craig got the point. LOL Jeanette Cheezum
Jcheezum
June 27, 2011
Short, sharp (as a knitting needle) and mean. Excellent work, Paul!
Heath Lowrance
June 25, 2011
Great story...I can see Katy making a return visit to these pages sometime...
author
June 25, 2011
i was always nervous around knitting needles - now i know why. thanks paul and SGH
nigel bird
June 25, 2011
Quality!
Alan Griffiths
June 25, 2011
brutal. poor Craig gets his balls barbecued then his ear drum popped. that's two extremely sensitive areas to hit in the final four sentences. (he deserved it though. no one's gonna cry over some real estate ghoul these days) good catharsis, Paul!
David James Keaton
June 25, 2011
knit one, purl two . . . oh dear, you've dropped a stitch con-man. Not to mention your (yarn) balls are on fire. A real sweater of a tale. Knocked my socks off. Aw right enuff wit de knitting puns. Cool story Mr. acountryJustnorthofargentina.
AJ Hayes
June 25, 2011
Niiice; knitters have a special place in my heart because they're well armed.
Donald Conrad
June 24, 2011
Cheers everyone. Glad Katy hit the spot...
Paul D Brazill
June 24, 2011
Holy shit- didn't see that coming, this reads more like an excerpt, a scene. I want to know more about this sexy, sadomasacistic, (did I spell that right) word playing, knitting, librarian with some obvious well controled issues. reminded me of Michelle Phiffer, as Cat Woman. And by the way-that's very cool.
Kevin Lynn Helmick
June 24, 2011
Nice! Liked this a lot.
Brad Green
June 24, 2011
I love a story with knitting needles - just my style! Wonder what she was knitting after she wiped the blood off the needles?
McDroll
June 24, 2011
I've always hated knitting, but... I sure do love Katy!
Sabrina Ogden
June 24, 2011
Yikes! Let's see Craig make shinola from what just hit his fan. Rockin' cool PDB!
HSanderford
June 24, 2011
Sharp characters, snappy dialogue and you always come throught with a satisfying twist. Awesome.
peg jet
June 24, 2011
Nice work, Paul, loved it!
Julie Lewthwaite
June 24, 2011
Great build up Paul. Fantastic execution.
Richard Godwin
June 24, 2011
There you go....never judge a book by its cover. Katy is my hero!!!
mti
June 24, 2011
Well told. I would like to see more of Katy.
L J Davenport
June 24, 2011
Mostly. it seems like our opinions of others are our weapons. Or theirs.
John Wiswell
June 24, 2011
Gruesome! Murderous librarian with her knitting needles, love it!
Julia Madeleine
June 24, 2011
Snappy! It's always the quiet ones, eh?
Chris Rhatigan
June 24, 2011
You've obviously met at least one of my way-back-when blind dates. Great writing!
fiona.glass
June 24, 2011
You had me in stitches! loved it.
tpluck
June 24, 2011
Oh wicked man! That dialog is dangerous!
June 24, 2011
Thanks everyone. Maybe I'll bring Katy back in another story.
Paul D Brazill
June 24, 2011
I shall be thinking of you next time I pick up my knitting, Paul.
Diana E. Backhouse
June 24, 2011
Nice dialogue, Mr. Brazill. Your words can be weapons too, I think.
Mike Miner
June 24, 2011
Classic PDB piece full of his usual wit and twisted humor. Lots of fun.
Ben Sobieck
June 24, 2011
Not the kind of librarian I like to hang out with. Ouch!
John Lindermuth
June 24, 2011
Thank God Katy took care of that asshole. Nicely done.
Don Lafferty
June 24, 2011
Full of the usual wit. A corker of a short!
Darren Sant
June 24, 2011
Full of the usual wit. A corker of a short!
Darren Sant
June 24, 2011
Ack! She's got a point, but... what a way to make it. ;)
Jen B
June 24, 2011
So tell me, where's this library and can I get a reservations card? Nice work, particularly the word dyads Marc Nash
marc nash
June 24, 2011

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